My memories are frozen deeply in my heart. Some day they will melt and show the good memories and the bad memories. My frozen memories will show love for my family and pain I have caused for my friends and family. When that day comes my friends and family will see a new me.
Hi Dylan,
ReplyDeleteWow! This peice of writing is very touching, emotive & depressing!!:p
From Krisana
hello,
ReplyDeleteI like how this story is so powerful and intense at the same time! As Krisana said, it was a very touching story and very emotionally filled at times! This was a great piece of writing
Caitlyn (:
Hello
ReplyDeleteWe really liked your piece of writing and how you used powerful and emotional language.
Your writing has reminded us of bad memories about arguments in our friendships that have been frozen deep down in our hearts but have melted away and now we're friends again.
What was the reason that influenced you to do this piece of writing?
If you go on our blog you may see different poems that our class has written.
Theane and Shalee