Thursday 1 March 2012

Matthew and Briana’s bedtime story.


Purpose: Entertain.

Matthew and Briana’s bedtime story.
One day there was a handsome young  prince,and and pretty little princess.
They lived in a big tall castle in New Zealand.
They loved their castle,and had lived there all their life. A couple of streets away was the biggest dairy ever. They went to the Dairy every day after there royal kindy ,to get lollies .They loved to get lots of lollies because they like to send them to children who couldnt afford them . They felt sorry for the poor and that is why they gave them to them also at Christmas time they would give them lots if Christmas presents.One day a wicked witch came and took all the lollies from the store then Matthew and Brianna were very sad. A couple of days later a girl called Rosie that moved next door to them and Brianna and Matthew told her about the witch. Rosie tells them that water melt the witches but not normal water it had to be water from a special water fall that was in the town  too streets away from them. So off they went to the find the water fall with the special water. so they went and packed some food and drink and 2 spare bottle.It was two hours later and they were at the forest looking for the water fall.. They got hungry and decided to sit and have a snack. Swish Swish the heard the water trickling amongst the rocks. They got out there drink bottles and filled with the special water. It was getting dark and late so they decided to walk home with the water but they didn’t bring a torch so they had to walk home in the dark. when they got home there Mum asked them what they had been doing and why they where home so late. They said that the had gone to get some water because the tap was not working that well. There Mum turned on the tap and checked if it was working ‘its working perfectly’ said there Mum. Now young ones it is time for you to go to bed ‘good night’ they say and run off to there bedrooms.The next morning the went to the dairy and Bring with them  a bottle of lemonade with was secretly magic water.They offered the witch a glass ‘Yes  ’ she said in a evil voice. Wow this water is delicious what is in this? “only special  ingredients.” The water isn’t working  they wispered to each other mabey we have to though it at her. So that is what they did. “Wow I cant belive that worked I thought it was a drinking postion not a trough at witches postion.” Said Matthew. They went home and lived happily  ever after.

4 comments:

  1. Charlotte and Fabs, what do the different colours signify? Ms F :)

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  2. Hi Charlotte,
    This is a really neat story I hope that Matthew & Briana like it.(:

    Krisana ,Room 13

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  3. Woww...
    This is pretty good.
    I really like it.
    From:Room 13
    Veniana (:d(:d

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  4. The diffrent colors was me and fabz we did it on google docs pink is me charlotte and blue is Fabz.

    THen we dicided that green would be our editing colour it was so much fun! :)

    From charlotte rm 13

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