Thursday 17 May 2012

The end of the World. By Vinny

I am standing outside my house.  Waiting...waiting....
Then there it was. The wave.  I tried to run but I couldn't. My legs felt like lead. I closed my eyes as I waited for contact. People screaming and crying.I was washed over and I tumbled underwater. Then everything went black. One thought came to me, "goodbye".

2 comments:

  1. Wow I read this Vinny and could immediately relate. This is one of my reoccurring nightmares.
    Miss h

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  2. I like your writing vinnie i really like the end

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