Wednesday, 16 May 2012

Josh H's Rocket Writing - Pain - 16th May

Pain is an unbearable felling that comes to all... eventually. There are stinging pains and pounding pains, but... the one that hurts the most doesn't do damage to your body. This... is the pain of loss. When one you hold close to heart passes on to the next world it is indeed painful. An injury will heal... but the loss of a loved one... That... will never heal.


Joshua Heape

2 comments:

  1. Powerful emotions, Josh - thanks for sharing. Ms F.

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  2. Short and punchy Josh. Every word in there is well placed and provocotes strong emotions in the reader. Some great writing coming out of Rocket Writing!
    Miss H

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